Professional feedback 4

I went to Ben for my final feedback and had him look at my website. When he responded he told me that the overall site is a bit slow to load the first time. But once you have loaded it the first time it is easy to load from that point on. He likes the background of the site and enjoyed the photo's I put up. His only concern with the photo's is the food photography. Ben think's I should take it down until after I get more photographs. I think in the near future I will just replace it with my thesis work.

Professional Feedback 1

I missed out on the first feedback so I went to talk to Melanie Adams about the my website and she ended up looking on the cell phone version. Her response was that I need to get ride of the about us page "it makes it sound like there is more than one of me" Say about or nothing at all. She thought my images looked amazing but to stick with what I do best and only put up my portraits and product photographs up. Besides that it looks pretty good.

Professional Feedback 3

Kuria Jorissen is a photography student that I asked to critique my website. Her response was that overall she liked the site. The main pictures on the website she thought it would be nice if when you click on them they bring you to the appropriate page. Example- If you click on the product picture have it take you to all the product photographs. She said she liked how simple my logo was but overall it could be improved on.

Professional feedback 2

After talking with Melinda I realized there are a few things that I need to fix, things that I have been starring at for days and am just now noticing. Such as the fact that some of my titles are in lower case while others are in all caps. I need to commit to one or the other. Next I need to have someone help me edit my bio. I was told to lose the I language. As for the homepage it seems to be a little busy I need to try and fade out the images or pick images that have the same color scheme. Think about changing the grid size so that not all the images are the same. She told me to use Keatley's website for an example.

Teachers Input

After showing my blog to a teacher I was told I should color coordinate the images I put on the front page and then I need to have someone help me edit my bio. I need to take the "I" talk out all together.

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